Lipstick Answers

Everything you ever wanted to know about Lipstick

Tartan Banner

What Do You Think Of My Story?

It’s sort of based on my life. Sort of. Bear in mind i’m on my mum’s yahoo & I’m only 10 years old.
I glared out of my bedroom window. The day was cold, dull with rain. Just how I like it, I thought to myself. I glanced out the window for a last few seconds then tumbled onto my bed & shoved twilight into the DVD player-quickly but carefully, as I had done this so many times I could do it with one hand & blindfolded. I settled into the film, mouthing every word, just like I had done the other 50 times I’d seen it. When the film finished, I took the disc from the player & put it back in it’s case. I was obsessed with twilight, & in love with one of it’s main characters-Edward Cullen. I stared at the DVD case with his unbelievebly perfect face on & stroked it carefully. I sighed, as I would never get to do this in real life. I sighed again & made my way downstairs.
“Morning, Mum,” I yawned.
“Morning, hun, nice sleep? Nice twilight screening? Again?” She replied. I laughed, & nodded. Same routine. Every morning..I laughed again-this time to myself. I sighed deeply & shrugged my shoulders. Walking over to the 5 1/2 ft long mirror, I grimaced at the horrible reflection of myself. Too tanned. Hair a horrible ash blonde. Of course, my hair was a normal blonde to everybody else,perfectly normal. But to me, it was just…eurgh. I so wanted my hair like Alice-(Edward Cullen’s foster sister)-It was a reddish dark brown colour, gelled & cut into a short pixie spikey look. I groaned at my 14 year old self. Obviously, my Mum heard.
“Lauren, would you stop looking at yourself like you are a pile of dirt that nobody wants to clean up. You are perfectly fine, & you know that!”
“Mm.” I replied. Of course I wanted to turn around & scream at her, ‘I am surely NOT perfectly fine, do I look like a vampire to you?!’ But, I knew I was better than that, so I slumped to the bathroom & brushed my teeth. I hopped in the shower, & when I was dry, I popped on some plain white underwear & opened one of my draws. I grabbed one of the three bottles of sunblock & plastered it all over my face & body. I know, it was raining outside, but sunrays still get through & there was no way I was getting a tan. Once it was dry, I padded white shimmer face powder all over every single part of my body. I took the twilight soundtrack & put it into my cd player, & started singing along with it. As I was doing so, I rummaged through my closet for my Alice Cullen outfit. I’d spent weeks down the town centre trying to find one just like Alice’s, & I would not give up. I’d finally found one, & that was the one I want to wear. “Aha.” I whispered, & laid a slate grey/silvery coloured dress on my bed. I pulled out the matching darker grey long sleeved shrug & also put it on the bed. I pulled down the built in ironing board from my wall & turned the iron on & started ironing. When I’d finished, I put it all back away & I slipped the dress over my head & stroked it down. I got closer to my mirror & applied a minimum amount of mascara, then smoothly put on my blood red lipstick. I brushed my just under the shoulder length hair & tonged my hair so it went slightly wavy. Thats my daily look done. I laid on my bed, relaxing listening to The River Flows In You- Yiruma when the buzzing & loud noise of my phone startled me. I ran to my cd player & turned the volume down so it was just a background noise. I answered my phone & laid on my belly on my bed.
“Hello?” I asked.
“Hi Lauren,” The caller said. I immediately recognized her voice-My best friend Lizzie.
“Oh, hi Lizzie,” I replied.
“Hey, do you wanna come round? I’m having a sleepover tonight with a few mates from school. I was thinking you could come round now & help me set up?”
“I’ll ask now, 2 seconds” I replied. “Mum!! Can I sleep at Lizzies & go round there now?!” There was silence for a few seconds.
“Yeah, course, get your stuff ready!” Mum answered.
“Yeah I’m allowed. I’ll just pack my stuff & I will be on my way,” I said in a normal volume to Lizzie.
“Great, I’ll see you in a min!”
“Bye,”
“Bye!”
I fumbled around in my closet to find pyjamas & jeans & a top. This is OK, I thought, & slung all of it in a bag. I picked up my makeup, sunblock, tongs & a toothbrush & put them all in there too. I shoved my phone in my pocket & skipped downstairs.

Tags: , ,

2 Responses to “What Do You Think Of My Story?”

  1. February 5th, 2010 at 12:12 am

    Sydony says:

    thats really good. i wrote stories when i was your age & thats better than anything i ever wrote. I’m thinking its not finished is it? but it’s fab so far.
    you use your grammar & language correctly n everything. :) its good.

  2. February 5th, 2010 at 4:37 am

    Live,Lov says:

    I don’t believe ur 10! If u are u have incredible talant. U should show this to ur English teacher although i’m sure he/she is aware of ur capability already!

Leave a Reply

Bookmark and Share